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АРГУМЕНТАЦИИ ПРИ

НАПИСАНИИ ЭССЕ НА

АНГЛИЙСКОМ ЯЗЫКЕ

Холодковская Елена Валерьевна,
учитель английского языка высшей категории, зам. директора по УВР МОУ «Гимназия №3», эксперт ЕГЭ
При выполнении задания С2 типичными ошибками являются следующие: • неправильный выбор разновидности эссе – экзаменуемые часто путают эссе "Мое мнение" с эссе типа "За и против"; • несоответствие работы теме, заявленной в задании; • нарушение жанрово-стилевых требований к эссе; • несоответствие аргументов сформулированным тезисам; • повтор аргументов при обосновании своего и чужого мнения; • отсутствие или неправильная формулировка контраргументов; • ошибки в композиции текста (проблема не сформулирована в начале эссе, нет вывода в конце, текст неправильно поделен на абзацы или деление на абзацы отсутствует вовсе); • неправильное использование средств выражения логической связи.

Учите
•
избегать
заумных или книжных фраз; •
использовать
простой, но одновременно хороший, грамотный, качественный английский; •
употреблять
больше прилагательных и наречий, но главное достоинство письменного английского в этом случае – синонимы
Основной проблемой при определении ключевого момента в том «
как писать эссе на

английском языке»
является неспособность кратко и грамотно изложить свои мысли. «Лить воду» не стоит, так как большой объем не нужной информации в эссе не станет достоинством работы, а будет ее недостатком

SOME PEOPLE SAY THAT ALL SHOPPING

WILL BE ON LINE WITH HOME DELIVERY.
WHAT IS YOUR OPINION?

SOME PEOPLE SAY THAT ALL SHOPPING

WILL BE ON LINE WITH HOME DELIVERY.
WHAT IS YOUR OPINION?

SOME PEOPLE SAY THAT ALL SHOPPING WILL BE

ON LINE WITH HOME DELIVERY.

TRADITIONAL SHOPPING

SMALL CORNER SHOPS

SUPERMARKETS

SHOPPING MALLS

INTERNET SHOPPING

SHOPPING FROM HOME


SHOPPING ON LINE

1.

Quick

6. Time consuming

2.

Cheap

3.

Convenient

4.

Safe

5.

Various

7. Limited


TRADITIONAL SHOPPING

1.

Exhausting

2.

Tiring

3.

Expensive -

7. cheap

4.

Inconvenient

5.

Time consuming -

6. quick


РАСПРЕДЕЛЕНИЕ ПО

АБЗАЦАМ
2 абзац
2,3,4
3 абзац
6,7
4 абзац
1,5

I personally think that a lot of people buy all things in the internet as it is safe, convenient and cheap.
I personally favour buying everything in the internet.
Firstly,
it is safe.
Secondly,
it is convenient.
Moreover,
it is cheap. To favor — американский вариант написания; соответственно, to favour — британский. При написании письма и эссе следует придерживаться либо ТОЛЬКО британского, либо ТОЛЬКО американского варианта, т.е. обеспечивать единообразие. Иначе можно потерять балл.
Firstly, it is safe as some experts say all the rights are protected. If we do not like the delivered purchase we can return it and get money or exchange goods in case of poor quality.
Secondly, it is convenient. One can sit at home in a comfortable armchair in front of the computer, surf the net and order some desired things. There is no need to travel long distances to the supermarket or to get wet through the skin bringing a big shopping bag home on a rainy day.
Moreover, it is cheap as one can find a great variety of things in different internet recourses and choose a desired product at a reasonable price.
Firstly,
it is
safe as some experts say all the
customer’s
rights are protected. If one does not like the delivered purchase he can return it and get money or exchange goods in case of poor quality. Secondly,
it is
convenient. One can sit at home in a comfortable armchair in front of the computer, surf the net and order some desired things. There is no need to travel long distances to the supermarket or to get wet through the skin bringing a big shopping bag home on a rainy day. Moreover,
it is
cheap as one can find a great variety of things in different internet recourses and choose a desired product at a reasonable price.
Firstly,
shopping in the Internet is
safe as some experts say all the
customer’s
rights are protected. If one does not like the delivered purchase he can return it and get money or exchange goods in case of poor quality. Secondly,
it is
convenient. One can sit at home in a comfortable armchair in front of the computer, surf the net and order some desired things. There is no need to travel long distances to the supermarket or to get wet through the skin bringing a big shopping bag home on a rainy day. Moreover, buying on line
is
cheap as one can find a great variety of things in different internet recourses and choose a desired product at a reasonable price.
I personally favour buying everything in the internet.
Firstly
,
on line

shopping is safe
as some experts say all the
customer’s
rights are protected. If one does not like the delivered purchase he can return it and get money back or exchange goods in case of poor quality.
Secondly,

it is convenient
. One can sit at home in a comfortable armchair in front of the computer, surf the net and order some desired things. There is no need to travel long distances to the supermarket or even to get wet through the skin bringing a big shopping bag home on a rainy day.
Moreover,

buying on line

is

cheap
as one can find a great variety of products in different internet recourses and choose a desired one at a reasonable price.